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Closer

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IWM serial ID: 01388

If I learned how to fathom the depth of the ocean
I would have barely scratched the surface of your presence
I could never comprehend the depth of your wisdom
And if I was ever able to close my eyes and see your face
There would be only one request that I'd make

I want to know you more
Take me to the bottom of the ocean floor
Let me feel the depth of your presence
With everything I've ever known
Is blown away by what you've shown
I want to; I want to get close to you

I if I could only see your magnificent face
I would have only touched the beginning of your beauty
And if I could know your ways
I could follow you forever

I want to know you more
Take me to the bottom of the ocean floor
Let me feel the depth of your presence
With everything I've ever known
Is blown away by what you've shown
I want to; I want to get close to you

With everything I've done I could never get close to you
But if you will it I will be with you in a second
Anytime you ever called me I would leave right away
I would leave this world in a blink of an eye

I want to know you more
Take me to the bottom of the ocean floor
Let me feel the depth of your presence
With everything I've ever known
Is blown away by what you've shown
I want to; I want to get close to you

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You could probably email it

You could probably email it to me at lodg22@aol.com.
My brother is the guitar person so i'll see
If he'll play it. I'm very thankful that you took it upon yourself
To write the music for me. I appreciate it and you can
Make alterations if you'd like.

Closer WHAT AN ADVENTURE!!!

Hey Faron,How's your summer so far? I hope you have a blast!! My son is 16 ,too. He's always working on things mechanical and building things most people would never think of.He plays guitar and bass,but his fav thing is fishing and hunting.
He (JOE),helped me find some of the cords for your song.I've gotta tell you, the more I sing it the more I love it.There are a few places where I repeated, part of anothr line,just to help the flow.Also,I wanted to know if I can say the title in the chorus? I've tried it both ways and honestly, they both sound good. Please remember,I AM NOT a singer however, I can get the melody across and then If you want, you can have someone else sing it for you. I've never really put music to someone elses lyrics, but it's been fun and easier then I thought it'd be.Let me know, how you want me to send it to you okay. It's pretty much finished,I am waiting for my fingers to heal a bit more so,I can finish recording it. I will send you the basic cords,placed above each line so you can play it. I hope you like it, Honesty is so very important .So,please let me know what you do or don't like,It won't hurt my feelings, I promise. This has really been an adventure, thanx, for the opportunity. Later Shelly R.W.

permission

This is one of my older songs. There were a couple that I wrote where they seemed to come from somewhere else.
You have my total permission to do whatever you want with my work

Deeply Moving

Hi Faron, this is absolutely beautiful.your lyrics are so intriging,I think you've got a special talent.Please don't ever stop the flow that you have going on.I can almost hear the melody.If your interested,I would like your permission to try to find the music for this beautiful piece.No strings ,Let me know .I love this!!!! Shelly R.W.

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